I agree with Liam about the title, but the subtitle doesn't read terribly well for me. "Lycanthro homo druid love" describes your story accurately, but when I first came to this I thought it was in Latin and couldn't parse what you were saying there. As this is a teaser avert, I'd ask a question like, "Druids and Lycanthrope in Love?"
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I like the top better. The color of the font jumps out more, and has a more aggressive feel to it.
Thanks Liam
I agree with Liam about the title, but the subtitle doesn't read terribly well for me. "Lycanthro homo druid love" describes your story accurately, but when I first came to this I thought it was in Latin and couldn't parse what you were saying there. As this is a teaser avert, I'd ask a question like, "Druids and Lycanthrope in Love?"
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