I redrew some panels to try and make them more cinematic and not so pin up. I've reworked the scene to show Tavius' motivation more strongly. I think I'm done with the changes and back to inking.
I'm doing a short silent sequence so there are a lot of small panels that don't make much sense when seen in my sketchbook but they really come together on the final page. It's going to be a strong scene that is simple and clear which is my main goal these days.